Pathetic, adjective:
pitiful, pitiable, piteous, moving, touching, poignant, plaintive, distressing,
upsetting, heartbreaking, heart-rending, harrowing, wretched, forlorn, feeble,
woeful, sorry, poor, pitiful, lamentable, deplorable, contemptible, inadequate,
paltry, insufficient, unsatisfactory.
Righteous (LIVING),
adjective: good, virtuous, upright, upstanding, decent; ethical, principled,
moral, high-minded, law-abiding, honest, honorable, blameless, irreproachable,
noble; saintly, angelic, pure; (RIGHTEOUS ANGER) justifiable, justified,
legitimate, defensible, supportable, rightful; admissible, allowable,
understandable, excusable, acceptable, reasonable.
Sedate, verb:
tranquilize, put under sedation, drug; adjective: slow, steady, dignified,
unhurried, relaxed, measured, leisurely, slow-moving, easy, easygoing, gentle,
calm, placid, tranquil, quiet, uneventful; boring, dull.
It wasn’t my best day, I’ll admit that. “The usual.”
That’s all the text said. I sat
down at the bar and ordered a beer from Nathaniel. I hate this place. It’s an old roller rink turned into a
bar. The shag carpet from the 60’s is a
brown and blue color and makes me think of vomit. Every now and then the disco ball flickers
light in my eyes and I hate the place even more. I look around and see the off duty cops at
the other end of the bar and they are going on about football. Seeing them makes me want to do something
illegal and start a fight, but I don’t.
I’ll sit here and let the thoughts roll around in my mind of why you
wanted me to meet you. I’m hoping the
beer or beers will sedate me before you get there. I know 10 pm is early for you and I might not
see you until around 1 am when you finish up with whatever tater tot you are
playing with. A stranger sits down
beside me and we talk a bit and he buys
the next round. He is some kind of
traveling salesman. He sales electrical
transformers for utilities. The ones
that blow out on your street with a loud bang and then no power. He said the squirrels are good for his
business. He is charming enough to amuse
me until you show up.
I watch the door for you.
The crowd makes me just as sick as the carpet in the room. The cops are
right there and I see two girls who are prostitutes walk- in and carry on like
the party just arrived. They are loud
and obviously high. I know their names. I say hello, by calling them by name just so
that the police will look my way. None
of us are stupid. The girls get their drinks and move over to the pool tables
and smoke cigarettes and pretend to shoot pool until someone pays them
attention.
People in the bar know I have a bad attitude and don’t
care. I’m waiting for you and buying
their beers, so they need to get over it.
I had a few late nights with the bartenders and some of the patrons
waiting on you and the longer you made me wait, the more my attitude soured. One time you didn’t show until about 3
am. Then I think I started a verbal
fight with you that was really pathetic, but in my mind, I was creating a
tornado in which the tables and chairs and bottles started flying all around us
and we were in a vortex of the bar. Once
our eyes locked, I was out of control and you escalated the whole scene. I think you enjoy making me mad. I have this
rage inside of me that will not stop until I am consoled. You bring me to a level that there is no
place else to go but straight down. I am
out of my mind when you take me to this level.
It’s twisted and wrong. It’s like
when two people are holding guns pointed at the other’s head and we go through
the whole scenario, until you back down and I am appeased. I am too righteous to back down. One day you will shoot me. I am o.k. with that. I know you will be the death of me.
I want to start doing shots, but as I look around I realize
the room is not full enough for me not to be noticed. I made up my mind earlier that I would come,
and as my thoughts tumble, and the guy sitting next to me keeps talking, I want
to leave. Something inside of me can’t
let me leave. I have to see you. You
charge me up like electricity. I have
been so low without you. Ironic I am
sitting by someone who deals in electricity, but he cannot help me.
I hate that every time you get to walk away and I have to
stay. I think about why I stay. I keep saying that I have no way to
leave. I am the only one keeping me
here. There is nothing else. I should have left long ago. I should be
living in New England and breathing cool salt air. I should be far from this dark hole. I hope this time you have new orders for
me. I’ve been here so long I have
convinced everyone and even myself that I am a local.
Hours pass and I wait.
I started talking to a lively fellow from England and we
talk about our favorite haunts when we are there and I completely miss seeing
you come in. I feel a tap on my
shoulder, and I turn. Before I say a word, your lips are mine and you kiss the
fight right out of me. I feel the vortex but it’s an empty wind, and it smells of the sea, and I am home
again.
this is such a love story beautiful passionately felt
ReplyDeleteSadly she is satisfied with second best. However we all have our faults don't we? Great story.
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